Okay, my review
10 out of 10!
So, first I have to say, I love the "Masamune-kun No Revenge" deal/vibe in this. (Yes, I am a anime nerd, and I'm sure you had more anime references in there too)
Second, I love how you had your other "assets" in this along with others from other games as well. The flow worked great. I cannot express how much I love this VN. Although I will say I somehow didn't get Emma or Lily on the "route" so I got to go back and figure that out in another run, but overall, this so far has punched through all expectations of a great thing. NiiChan, I do hope you continue to keep up this great work and see it to the end.
Lastly, anyone that wants a great story, great scenes, and great character build, I recommend this VN. I am now wanting more soon :)
NiiChan, thank you for this great project you made, can't wait for more updates, and I hope to see your "other" work continue too and see how they all fit together, IF they all are in the same universe.