Hey Unknown Hermit! I know that this might feel like a pat on your back, but please don't be too hard on yourself. Like epykslion wrote, take your time. It's perfectly fine to go back and update chapter two to your liking. I can't truly understand the imposter syndrome (I'm no writer) because to me what you provided is already extremely unique, intriguing and immersive. If you can provide something even better then who am I to judge :P. In my eyes, the game is original and the characters extremely compelling (the narration switch is extremely interesting). I bet it's hard to be a perfectionist, but I hope that you notice how many people love your work and that says a lot. Anyhow, sorry for rambling, take good care of yourself, stay healthy, happy and lucky. :) Sending you lots of positive vibes (hopefully)!