Hi,
nice game, played and rated.Still not sure if this is a text based game or not. you should make the world go a bit faster, now it looks very, very slow . The story telling is OK and never to slow, but the fact that the world is moving very slow makes it a bit boring after a while. make some extra layers with clouds and make them move at different speeds. All in all it is a very nice start for a game and would love to see how this evolves if you could make it into a 10-20 min story telling game.
Please feel free to try out my game and rate it here: https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/474542
Many thanks,
Kris