Since it's fairly short, I would be happy to go through it to make it sound more natural, if you have a way for me to read and edit, like a .txt or whatnot.
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Thank you for your comments and great suggestions.
I was not sure how to contact you, so I have created a spreadsheet. Anyone can edit this.
There is of course a .txt file available as well, similar to Ren'py's other games.
I know this is a great burden for you, so please do not hesitate to change your mind.