The asteroid/ship collision is an interesting combination. It's a bit hard to read at page-size, but easy enough at fit-width. Nice use of color for emphasis. Good text; the map a bit hard to sort out. This is a puzzle-ish adventure - if the players have seen it in advance, they'll have a much easier time, so the GM needs to either make sure they haven't read it, or alter a few details. I loved how much detail there was about the ship; there's a lot to work with.