Ok, I "finished" it - I'm not gonna lie that was a huge letdown, I really wanted to see where this was going!
I liked the characters and the minimalistic approach to the ambients, the story so far was catchy and the dialogues were smooth - even though a fair bit of mispellings.
I really hope you're planning on finishing this, 'cause the sudden stop RIGHT after that big plot twist made me go "NOOOOO"!