Great work on all the character lines and portraits, the dialog sections felt very polished. The gameplay could use some more clear transitions/game juice. I wasn't always clear on what was causing me to take damage and some of the transitions were very sudden (a little insert card, "Later that night", "Back at the manor", "You died! Try again.." could help clarify why the scenes changed). Also a hit sound effect is very important in an action game so you know that you're not missing.