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This game feels a little incomplete, i like the idea of being a book looking for an ending, but the agency moments don't really feel like book narratives and there doesn't seem to be a conclusion either. I can tell that a lot of work went into the art assets because I have done pixel art before and even making somewhat decent pixel art takes forever. I would recomend making the game a bit more minimalist next time and maybe working with a bigger team. Also, a little bit more time brainstorming probably wouldn't hurt, it felt like this game needed a few more ideas to bring it together.

Thank you this comment gave me a lot of good criticism. I will remember this if I ever go into the project again. If I do I will have more people helping and time won't be an issue. I will also keep this comment tagged so I remember to look at it and compare. Thank you.