Well written, but too linear for my liking. Usually in a text-based game I like to feel like I can do whatever I want with an extensive list of options.
That's funny you mention that, because I thought I'd snuck in a lot of options for the amount of dev time I was able to put into the project. i was wrong. xD Thanks for the review, I'll try to get even more branches in with whatever I make in Inky next!
