Hah, nice ending on this one! The old man turns back time and everything restarts!
Good base here, but could use some improvements and adding of the missing systems. As well as for the dialogue, the norm is usually that the first time you press something, all text shows up instantly and the next time you press it skips ahead. This gives people who don't want to wait for the typewriter effect but want to read the story faster a way to handle it.