This is outstanding. I hadn't played a kinetic novel before so I was a bit unsure if I would like it at the beginning, but the setting is interesting, the characters are compelling, and the overall quality of the game is higher than most visual novels I've come across.
I really felt for Gwin, and the first few chapters drew me deep into the story and brought out more emotion than I was expecting. The fact that he makes his own choices rather than mostly serving as an insert or vehicle for the player makes him feel more real as a character. I really hope that the development of the next novel goes well and that we see more of Gwin's journey.
I can't recommend this highly enough.