Thanks for the detailed feedback!
Yes, sadly, English is not my mother language, and honestly, I wasn't expecting any grammar errors. But thank you a lot for pointing them out. I see that bucket wasn't really encouraging, yeah, honestly. You are pretty right; I kind of joined this jam when 5 days were left, and honestly, I started Game Maker 2 months ago and have never done a track in my life, so thanks for reminding me of the awful music. XD encourages me to improve in that regard, but I'll definitely try to get better.
Overall, I took notes of your detailed feedback; I'll gotta to use those for my next jam entry! Thank you, and have a nice day, mwah!