First of all I'd like to congratulate you on finishing the enhanced demo! I love it all! I am particularly OBSESSED with the UI <3
Second I've found some tiny bugs (I think they're more like errors?) I'm gonna leave them here, I hope that's okay. :)
1.
Kayn spooked Fenir so bad he became a floating torso! (lol) I believe this was the first scene in the library.
2.
This is the second meeting with Kuna'a. The second "their" (highlighted) should be "they".
3.
I think here Aisa's sprite is supposed to be behind Kuna'a's. (The last confrontation before our Central buddies appear.)
I would also like to suggest adding numbering to the "save" and "load" pages since it's quite disorientating not having an indication of which page I'm on.
Otherwise everything else runs super smooth! :D