too much drivel in this sales pitch. the trailer and it's voice are especially grating. too bad, because the game actually looks kinda good.
what's absolutely NOT good however, is your idea of selling this game, in fact it's a complete train wreck. get rid of the "geschwafel" (german word for blah blah) - just tell us you made a game, what it's about, and it's features, not some vague hints on some old ip you didn't even care to mention.
tl;dr:
i could have written a better sales pitch with my eyes closed, this is not how you do it. good luck, you gonna need it.
the game: likely a solid 7.5/8.0
all the rest: swiss cheese -10/10