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it's funny how they use 'hunter' to describe what a 'scriviner' is, it's almost as if this word 'hunter' was chosen very intentionally for the potential misunderstand when in fact the word 'scout' would fit much closer and more importantly would have less potential for misunderstanding.

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the book you are given at the end of day 2, it's called a ledger not a catalog,

a catolog is to categorize things for ease of find, a ledger is what you use to log things that have been exchanged.

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God bless the saviour who is here to tell us what’s the difference between ledgers and catalogs. Alleluia 

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I'm just trying to help improve the textual media by pointing out places where it is obviously wrong.
the story and concept are great, i just want the visual novel to be a success but it can't be that with these basic mistakes left in.

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This is a very minor and insignificant issue. With all due respect, I feel like you are the only one worrying about it.