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I normally don't comment on these, especially for this reason but I wanted to just share this because it looks like you might have written it with a migraine. Or drunk. No offense, I'm interested in your story and I hope you find this helpful and not nitpicky. 

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No, it’s okay. I just type faster than I think  sometimes so typos happen a lot. It’s always harder to catch your own typos when your brain fills it in for you. And the release of this prologue specifically was a bit rushed. So thank you for pointing them out so I can fix them. I plan on having someone look them over for me for my future chapters so they’ll have more revisions. 

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I completely get it. I don't mind so much, I just thought it might be helpful. Going through to look for and correct typos can cause you to lose your momentum. I look forward to your future updates, typos and all!