Oh really? My bad haha, the main protagonist said "Good morning, Manhattan" so I assumed that's where the game took place. I'll be sure to update the vid description after this reply.
The translation is fine, there is a bit of weird phrases here and there that does make the flow of reading inconsistent. And from what I noticed, there are a couple of words that are misspelled for example "neighborhood is spelled as neighbourhood" and "cozy spelled as cosy." I haven't encountered anything gamebreaking tho lol.
You have a good day too <3