Good story. It kept me interested to rhe end. At first I thought it would be the simple consequences of the elf's acyions but at the end, it looked like the guild lord had conseques of his actions he was going to have to deal with. I liked it but being honest I had to dock some points for not following the theme os 1 page. Keep up the good work and see if you can edit your stories down to fit the format snd you are gold. That is a hard thing for me in me writing.