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   I've played many visual novels before playing this one, and this one is definitely one of my favorites. Unfortunately, most of the good furry visual novels are usually made by a small team - or just one person - so they don't have that much support.

   I've known about this visual novel for quite a while before actually playing it. The main reason was because most of the small visual novels have either been abandoned or just has a short story. But this one seems to be getting finished ( I hope )

   Another thing is I was surprised by was the story of this one. Most of the stories in the more popular visual novels are mainly just some guy in college dealing with mental health and all that - Im not saying that's bad,  just repetitive. So I liked this one for featuring more than that. The whole idea about wolves going extinct a long time ago and you and some other guy are the only ones left is a really scary idea.

   Although, the game can use some touch-ups.

   The art is really nice, it's a style I don't normally see. But, some of the character's sprites- especially Charles - have their shoulders a little to up; giving them an unnatural look. If you decide to consider this, then I drew a quick example of what I'm referring to:


   When someone draws shoulders, they should normally be slanted. I'm pretty sure you can find a better tutorial somewhere else, but I wanted to inform you of this. I drew a red triangle on the right drawing to help show what I mean. The shoulders should be lower than the neck, otherwise it looks stiff and pretty uncomfortable. I suggest you look for a tutorial on YouTube or some other website if you wish for a better explanation.

   The father of the hyena's sprite seems to have this little thing applied, so im not sure if you're aware of this already. But oh well...

   The English translation in the earlier chapters could also use some work.

   Besides that, this game was by far one of the best ones that I played - and I played a lot. Thank you for making this, and I will wait patiently for the next update. Thank you! ":3

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Wow thanks a lot Maksim!

Yeah the furry visual novel fandom is very niche, so only a few get some spotlight. But it's ok, small creator as me enjoy some supportive comments like that!

My art definitely need some rework indeed, I actually redraw Gaël, I wonder if I'll do Charles haha. Good shoulders advice btw!

For the English translation I'll do my best ><

Don't worry I'm not letting this project down! I'm halfway in my update, but with work and the incoming May Wolf 2024 Jam, it will take some extra time...

Thanks again for your comment 😇