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That's what I am talking about! But in fact, there is only one negative comment here, from a dude with a newly created account and completely ridiculous, fictitious and untrue arguments, for what he was roasted. So it's not worth paying attention to him(them), even considering that he(they) generate fake upvotes under his post.

I don't know about English, but in my language, "criticism" has two meanings. One is well-reasoned criticism, which is based on facts, and the second one is not, just to hate and throw shit on the fan. So you need to pay attention to the first one, because both the problem and the method of solving it will be indicated there. And the second one needed to be ignored.

When I write my arguments, unlike that dude, I can confirm them and make sure that everyone agrees with it. Let's look at examples of what good criticism could be:

• I wrote that there is a lack of face animations or they do not correspond to the moment. You do not need to go far for example. Once you started the game, there is a scene with Coach getting into a bickering with Chester on the court. Should they have such faces? I don't think so)



• The  disruption of the game experience does not come only to faces. It's worth skipping a couple of dialogues further and we have a game of tennis. The text describes the sound. And why is there no related sound, although it is present in the game files? It also can be tweaked.



• Then I wrote about logical errors. SPOILER ALERT. In the coach's route, on the second date on the 14th day, he asks to be called by his first name. But if you made the bad choices, this date only happens on day 20. Between day 15 and 19, MC begins to call the coach by his first name, although this event has not yet happened in the second case. This can also easily be fixed. 

THE END OF THE SPOILER.


• As long as I can remember, when you start a new game and choose the appearance of the MC, you need to mouse over the "default" and "accept" letters themselves to click on them (yes, this is a test, i know, and everything will be redone, but still). The solution I found is just to add a background for them and the problem disappears.


• Somewhere before, I had a post also from the coach's route, where the text describes some actions that could be supported by animations on the screen.

That's what is a good criticism. When people can read and think, they can give useful feedback that will help improve the game or change what seems awkward.

P.S. Dyne, you don't need to rush and fix this, it can wait. Do what you are doing and don't listen to anyone. I just gave it all as an example of my point. I mark to myself everything and if I manage to collect all these moments for the entire route, I will write you and attach a working solution where it is possible

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Yeah, i totally agree with you, positive feedback and criticism are welcome and needed in internet and in real life, and about the negative comments, yes, there's only one here, but there were a lot of guys in f95zone agreeing with them and talking shit, but they were really just talking shit, so the dev shouldn't bother about it at all. I even thought about answering them in the forum i my goal was to praise the dev, not fight with haters, so i decided to post my opinion here instead.

I also like to give constructive criticism to my favorite authors, but i usually do that in private messages, this was the first time i felt the need to do it in public.

For last i would like to give an idea to Dyne if he ever read this, about a new game, what about a game were you can play multiple routes at the same time? That's pretty common in straight games, and they even have the "harem" category for that, but never in gay games... i would really love to play a game where i could be a bottom with multiple partners and read a meaningful story at the same time, there are some games like that but they are sandboxes and the stories are kinda all over the place, so since you're one of the most relevant authors in the gay community would you think about that for an idea? maybe? pretty please?