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I think you're right, more information from each answer would be great.  On my second play through I got barely any information because asking if "she believed" ended up having to have a follow up question to clarify.  Felt like I got punished for choosing the outlier question, and lost two overall for no info gain. Then again... I probably should've seen it coming from such a vague question.

Personal preference for story aside, I think your writing was fine overall, just this particular scene didn't end up communicating much.

Thanks so much! Hope you enjoy it :)