In the meantime, here's my comments so far:
Lake Shore:
You've allowed for DRINK WATER (bonus points for that), but it says, "There's nothing suitable to drink here." Surely, you could allow drinking the water or give a message to explain why you can't drink it, like "It's too stagnant to drink."
X TOWER: You've said "It's" and "It is" in the same sentence. If you're going to use contractions, it's probably better to be consistent and use them all the time.
ABOUT: "About what? About love." Love it!
Use ENTER as a synonym for GO.
Is it "raven's tower" (common noun) or Raven's Tower" (proper noun)? You've used a mixture of both ("raven's Tower") and it's used inconsistently throughout the gamef.
Outside Cave of Magic:
Add FEEL as a synonym for TOUCH. You've done it elsewhere.
SMELL BOOT: "Troll's" should be "troll's".
TALK TROLL: "These ears" should possibly be "His ears".
Inside Tree:
Needs its own image.
In Front of Raven Tower:
Needs its own image.
ENTER LAKE caused me to ENTER TOWER.
Ground Floor of Raven's Tower:
Needs its own image.
X LIGHT: "something glistens silently" should be "something glistens", or is it possible for something to glisten loudly?
King's Floor:
"King's" should be "king's", unless it's a proper noun like "King Arthur's".
"dances" should be "dance".
X TORCH: "opposite the throne one" should be "opposite the throne".
SIT THRONE: "crow's throne" should be "raven's throne" (for consistency). Crows and ravens are different. I just did some reading up. Crows make a caw sound and ravens make a lower croak sound, so maybe yours is actually a crow.
Top of Tower:
Needs its own image.
Cave of Magic:
When you open and close chest, it says "Does he expect something?" As a chest is an inanimate object, shouldn't that be "Does it expect something?"
INSERT PEARL: "the one if it" should be "it"; "He almost" should be "It almost".