I am still confused about the ending that corrupts the files. Apparently i got the bad ending, it was something about getting hacked into?
How do you even get the good ending? finishing all notes?
I was getting stumped on how to finish the scare and eat notes, unsure how to make the meatball edible and whatnot.
As for the English, it is kind of obvious its not your first language. and I had to re-read some lines several times, or think harder than normal about what you meant to say. However, there was never an error so bad that I didn't understand the meaning. Its a lot of grammar errors, not too many errors with using the wrong words.
Finally, i know how important and appreciated feedback is, so when I play something in-depth like this, I feel I owe it to the developer to give feedback.