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Man, I wish that I liked this game. It's obvious that the dev puts a TON of work into making it. But 90% of it is just wasted. It ends up being one ridiculously stupid anime style joke after ridiculously stupid anime style joke after ridiculously stupid anime style joke.

I downloaded it because a few of the comments were like, "what a great story." To which I say, "WHAT STORY?" There is like 6-10 times in the entire game where a plot THREATENS to develop, but then is cut off by a ridiculously stupid anime style joke.

Seriously, here is the plot synopsis for what I have read:

  1. The multiverse is real
  2. The MC is dragged from one reality into another
  3. Some dude wants to help him learn to control his magic
  4. The MC pissed some chick off

And that is it. The end. Not the end of the content. But the end of the plot. EVERYTHING else is just a ridiculously stupid anime style joke.

At the very beginning, the dev points out that there are times where you can't spam click through the text boxes/animations. So that the audio can stay synced. And those times DO exist. It happens with every single ridiculously stupid anime style joke. Which is roughly every 1.2 nanoseconds.

Even when it looks like the MC is headed towards a sex scene, it almost always just ends in a ridiculously stupid anime style joke. Most porn games start with the obligatory handjob, move on to the obligatory blowjob, head for the obligatory titjob, go through the optional cunnilingus scene, and then head for the obligatory sex scene.

This game makes it as far as the obligatory blowjob before the dev loses his copy of the Kama Sutra and just hits the "rinse and repeat" button.

And what's up with the master/slave dynamic in this game? The MC tells his slave that he wants her to stop calling him "master," that she should be her own person, making her own choices. And then immediately orders her to suck his dick.

Well, which is it? Is she his equal, or his slave? Are we supposed to be romantically inclined towards her, or is she just our toy? Pick a fucking lane yo!

I don't care if you hang her upside down from the ceiling and beat her with a bat before fucking her face until she pukes. It's not like any sluts are actually getting hurt. (Not that I would care if they were) But keep a flow going man. That is INTEGRAL to storytelling.

So that's this game in a nutshell. A ton of work, with no measurable results. It's like if the US Congress had a love child with India based customer support.

Just gonna say... you weirdly seem to have gotten heated over something you don't like. I honestly found it pretty great, stories need a bit of playfulness and banter. Things don't always have to be dead serious at all times nor grim dark considering the premise for this one. Also, it's only got 2 "episodes" lmao. This is very obviously going to get bigger as the story goes, so of course it will be mostly world and character building for now. And so far there's a lot of plot hooks that have actually been taken relatively seriously, considering it's not exactly meant to be serious at all. Nice thesis on why you don't like it though, but honestly if you don't like something and don't have actual constructive criticism, you really shouldn't bother writing a short novel on why you didn't like it o.o

Ah, after thought on the last bit: we already know MC's stance towards slavery. They made it clear like... 4 times in such a short time? Them doing lewd stuff was literally a mutual thing. She leans into the master bit, he keeps asking her not to. He has even flat out said he wants them to be on equal terms. So I'm more confused as to how you didn't get that and demand some form of clarification o.o