Good game! Although I wasn't very interested in the characters' general conversation, I'm glad I stayed for the whole thing, and everything clicked well at the end.
There's a good use of Twine's features (timing of the lines, formatting, etc.). Although it might hurt the look of the general chat, color-coding for the names would improve readability. But it's just my opinion. I'm also curious if the change of font at the end is on purpose or not.