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I know every other comment on here is about continuing this game. I have some amateur game making experience myself (what got me out was my inability to do my own art) and wow let me tell you what an absolute masterpiece. The story is very enticing and incredibly engaging. The artwork is amazing and gorgeous (the only suggestion I would make a little better is making the main character have a little more detail or have him be customizable to some degree). The characters although while there are not many in number, they have a lot of depth and full story arcs in just a short period. The lore and vibe I know took a lot of research and passion. The minigames can use some work but hey those are hard in Ren'py. The few bugs that are there really aren't bad at all, that was another main struggle of mine. Also you look like someone who really does it because they love it and not even to make money on the side. I know the pandemic was very hard on us all but I hope to see you get back into this one. I see this as your passion project and its a passion of mine to see this get back up and rolling again. I'd be willing to donate or pledge a decent amount beyond what I'm already doing on Patreon to see it get back up and rolling. Also if you are at the creative wall or open to suggestions for the future, I came up with a word doc with suggestions for branching paths (about 7 endings) after meeting with father and running away or becoming part of the coven. I hope you would look at them. I enjoy creative writing, just can't do artwork. Just want to help with what I can. Let me know what you think.

P.S. Ojalá hablara mejor español. De lo contrario escribiría esto en español.

Hello MysteryMachine,
If you're realy open to give me suggestions it would be better if you first play the PREMIUM version, I can actually send it to you for free if you promise me you will give me feedback. For that just join in DISCORD server of the game: https://discord.com/invite/MrwCc7N

After all, there are already some endings done in teh game that are not yet available in the free version, so your suggestions could be already fullfiled or not done at all. ^^ (Warning, the path with the blond can get to really dark and disturbed endings).

In any case, thank you very much for such nice and long comment, it's always appreciated! ;)