The Premise and execution of the game is... good. I want to give this game 4 stars but the opening of the game cannot be overlooked. I know how difficult it is to find an editor, and that English is not everyones native language. Ive spoken enough times with other creatures about these issues that I understand them very well. But the amount of errors from start to, lets say the first time going to school, is immense. Its just too much. I couldnt even begin to actually immerse myself in this game until well past that point and even then it was difficult.
The idea you have is brilliant! Not many creators would ever attempt such a switching of mindset and situations like you have. Its normally a very niche genre for femdom and things of a similar nature but you have taken it to the next level like an absolute pro!
I cant state enough how great this idea for a game is and how awesome the idea of the characters ive met so far is. Even the insane disproportion to the bodies adds both sex appeal and comedy in some situations.
Dont give up and keep creating. I'll watch this games updates but I can garuntee you that Im not the only one that will comment about the typos and grammer. I FULLY KNOW ITS A DIFFICULT THING AND IM NOT TRYING TO BE A JERK SO DONT SAY I AM. Im trying to give genuine feedback because quite frankly this game premise rocks and I havent seen any other game on here be brave enough to do what you have done so far.
Keep on writing.