Menu theme needs a different soundfont, current one sounds like ass. BG darkness should be something the designer decides, not the player at startup. The opening narration keeps switching between worldbuilding lore and personal character motivation, which makes it confusing. I don't even know who the protagonist is. You badly need an editor, sentences like "Not hearing Rim my ass anymore will be a breath of fresh air " are extremely confusing. Giving unique stand-out traits to generic NPCs (unless they are meant to be recurring characters?) is bad writing. The player should not be presented with unnecessary information. Going through the tutorial and parsing the text feels like work, complete anti-fun. It's better than it used to be, but the battle menu is still incomprehensible and takes far too much effort to decipher. No normal person would ever finish the tutorial. There is an immense amount of effort put into this game, which is a real shame, as it has no audience.