Pros:
Good models.
Cons:
LOTS of typos. It's okay if English isn't your first language, but I'm sure someone, maybe a patron, would be happy to proofread the text.
Also, I'd love if VN games had more creativity. Not every game has to be 100% anime tropes. Doesn't that get old? Break the mold. Tell your own story. Stand out, and you will see far more success.
I know some of this might seem harsh, but my goal is to give constructive feedback. It's hard work putting all of this together and there is a spark of competence here.
Good luck.
I mean ur not wrong with the 100% anime tropes but for my things, im not a anime watcher, dont watch Hentai etc but I think that these girls are well made and kinda look hot ngl
but "normal" girls without anime style would kinda destroy his game but idk its still a good game althought it has typos but its not that bad for me :D