Looks 10/10, Story 10/10, Characters 11/10. Damn this is your first one? You got some talent, man^^ keep up the good hard work. I´ll be waiting 4 the next Ep. When will it be avaible here?
Ep3 will get a free release both here and on Patreon tomorrow. Ep4 will come out for Patrons a week or two into October. And yeah this is my first game (tho I do contract work for an outsourcing house for my regular job. So you've prolly seen my work on some "real" games unknowingly).