Congrats on submitting! I love 1 vs all type games and keep trying to design one. Here are my two main thoughts:
- I wanted to see something for the other DMs to do while it is not their turn. Perhaps they are the NPC's in the scene or they and influence the story in some manner.
- What I enjoyed about your game was the way your set a broad tone and whittled down what often is an extensive action list to 3 items. I thought that was particularly clever.
Having toyed around with this style, its not easy. So I'm glad to see someone tried to pull it off in 48 hours! Nice job!