Congrats on finishing! I had a few thoughts while reading:
- Your intro, presentation, and layout... dang it's good. I immediately knew what I was getting into and was super down!
- The use of stock art was highly effective in a way I did not expect. Well done.
- The villain / scenario generator... nice! Felt very cinematic.
- The Steven Redhead quote (and actually all the quotes) set the tone exceptionally well.
- The description of the dice pool was not clear. Like I know what you were trying to tell the reader but it took me too long to figure it out.
- I wasn't clear how the skills and attributes fit into the rolls (I may have missed something with the Character Creation section which was nice).
- The Getting Pummled section is great! As well as the Calling for the Hero.
All in all man, I think you have the beginnings of something really strong here! Great job!