Good job for going left of field on this one! I had two major thoughts:
- I really wanted to see the players doing more lawyer-type stuff in more lawyer-type situations.
- The system / mechanics needed to reflect the theme more. Which in the beginning I thought it was going to but then didn't follow through.
Yeah, I was really excited when I saw this one premise wise. And would love to see you take the premise and really run with it. Cause I do think there could be a cool RPG there. But I would launch from the Satire and Lawyer angles and build up, from scratch there.