Early rating:
Context : so the reason I decided to read this because of the April fool :) And you know what I wasn't disappointed, thou the art style need improvement ( sorry :( ), but it does add the unique of the story. Story wise I'm very hooked now and very much waiting patiencently for the next update of it.
overall: great story, art style need some refinement. 8.9/10
Great job, hope to see what in store for us in the next build. :3