Greetings my friend, I'd like to advise you to fix some typos that reoccur in the game. While there is no problem with the grammar in general, "his/her" and "him/her" get mixed up pretty often. For example, when the protagonsit encounters Nanami for the first time and Yuki gets frustrated: "She felt that Misaki's mind was no longer on the ride or on her, so she had to do something to get her attention again ..."
Sorry if I mess up the grammar myself, English is not my native language, and I do not respect it.