I've got the unique oppression to review and rate your new version with updates! It's a lot easier to understand for the most part, and I'm able to follow along with their mechanics and game plan a lot better.
It's super duper important with these guys to be able to play a game with em in order to criticize for the most part, just since they're pretty involved and it would be tough to gauge their strength without actually seeing it in action.
Still I gotta really commend the creativity put into their mechanics and their theming. The one time abilities are fun and unique to them as well!
You're 3/3 in my opinion 😆.