Ahh thank ya for feedback~
I was originally planning on sequel to have a city map with some neighborhoods and landmarks specified. But was also thinking of shoving in some NPCs and more adversaries. Altho having all that would make it much bigger than Helstalt (about double in pages).
So I'll cut back and take your feedback. Just stick to fleshing out the various locations. Perhaps try throw in a few NPCs as well if I got room.