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Pretty late replying it was a great story the characters felt accurate and the scene with Little Star had me squealing like a girl the picture playing a big part in that. Also,, is this story in friggin' 2nd person! To think the first story I'd read in that perspective is something like this, what a world, a glorious world.

I am so ready for this update I cannot wait. Also the improvements to Asterions sprite work like the creases on his shirt or like actual snaps on his suspenders, the "brushed" effect on his pecs and different shading all look real good but I'd be lying if I didn't say I was sad to see his bulge go(I mean it's still there just less notable) Gosh I don't want to be mean to Asterion but I'm also starved for content it does make sense to add the path though. Agggh I'm torn I'm sure that it will be amazing though just as the rest of this story has been so far. It's being released so close to my Birthday so that's nice too. Have I mentioned I'm excited!!!!!

I have to say I'm not usually a fan of when the protagonist gets mad at someone in a vn since often I wouldn't have been mad in that situation; it comes off as annoying and it creates a sort of disconnect. BUT, I have to say this time I totally felt it I was right there with Luke 100%. Seeing him vent out his frustrations to people that he had considered his friends about how they treated him felt really empowering. It helped solidify him as a character to me one who has their own thoughts. And learning that he's seemingly the last human contextualizes his character and really adds to his feeling of loneliness, that it doesn't just apply to the dogs but to everyone. It further explains why he's so bothered by them treating him like an outsider (not that being treated like an outsider wouldn't bother someone(alon excluded))he has nowhere to belong. Even if the dogs can share in his feelings with pack mentality, there's nobody who will ever truly be able to understand him in the world. 

(Side note I want more Cooper he's so cute)