Persons as in multiple amount of humans doesn't exist in the English dictionary. Plural for person is people and the only other way person can be used is when talking about an item someone has on them / on their person. I'm not a native speaker either so I could be wrong about some things as well. Thank you for the great game, your time to check and reply every comment and your hard work °^°
Edit: The "Persons" I mentioned is on the Content Warning screen
Not gonna lie I downloaded it for a quick nut but this game went up to my favorites along with Eternum, Once in a lifetime and a bit of Ripples. THE QUALITY IS ABSOLUTELY INSANE. Holy hell I stayed up until 6 in the Morning cause I got invested in the story. It ended and I felt sad I need more. Daaaamn this is a good game. As of chapter 1+2 I give it a solid Must play / 10. Take your sweet time with the game because that quality is worth the wait. The only minor thing I found is that when the game starts it mentions "persons" instead of people. Everything else was perfect
I have to add cause I went to replay the game and made different choices. I feel like if the player CHOOSES to NOT sleep at the "hub" area (trynna avoid even early spoilers) and instead return home. It keeps the reader more invested in the story. Outside of the scene h scenes that is. I went through it once and the second play through i was like "WAIT I COULD MEET THEM THIS EARLY?" not to mention the choice of saving a certain girl feeling an important choice even though it may not be. But yeah I absolutely love your work, more of this please
I just finished Season 1, I gave the story a go but found it dull at the start so I skipped up until later (won't spoil) and then the story got so damn good I ended up reading it by accident and then slowed down to read it carefully. I feel earlier chapters need polishing but damn am I excited for later releases, I'll wait till we have a few more chapters of season 2 before I start it but great damn job with the characters. Also at some point a character named Riley showed up and I just froze and went "wait isn't that...yeah..this IS FROM STORMY SIDE NO?" and went to doublecheck, the end credits confirmed my suspicion.
I saw this commented before but I fell upon the same issue. Upon arriving at Stormy Side and Chatting with Dad on the phone, after the conversation ends I cannot do anything. I got through it with Renpy console like you had replied before but I thought it'd be important to mention the issue persists. Love the game so far.
