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5 stars for "All the boxes!" <3
Heat level: 2.5/5 "Sweet With a Touch of Spice"
No joke, now that I've finished every route, this was a great game! Well written and decently paced. There are only a handful of typos throughout the entire game, which is wonderful to me. I love that we were given mature love interests; not many VNs offer this. If I had to chose a favorite love interest, it is Lawrence. (He's spicy and takes no crap from anyone.)
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The Downside (for me):
(This doesn't change my rating of 5 stars, but man am I bummed about this lost opportunity.)
Deep down, as a psychological romance fan, I wish Eric could have been romanced, but I get it after 'you know what' was divulged. Not the planted items, not the expected stalker-like behavior, but--THAT.
You know what I'm talking about.
And sadly, that one detail is all it would take for most romance fans to scrape a bad guy off their plate--unless they are true yandere fans, but probably not even then.
.... But remove that one detail and you would've had the perfect Yandere love interest to work with and it could've been a great "change me for the better" story. But they didn't. :(
Okay, I'm done pouting now. It's still an amazing game.
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This demo was amazing! I can't wait to see the full version. The voice acting and artwork are very well done, the atmosphere and music are well placed, and the conversations between Crowe and the MC feel natural, even when choosing hostile/defensive answers.
Interestingly enough, while the 'hostile/defensive' choices might make the MC appear weak-willed because she gives in anyway, I actually think it drives the point home that, realistically speaking, if you were to wind up stuck in a stranger's home out in the middle of nowhere with no SAFE alternative for leaving, your safest option is to be on your best behavior--Especially after being saved from freezing to death in the wilderness. That being said, I was actually surprised at being offered the option to throw a tantrum over being undressed and re-dressed given that this is the proper way to treat prolonged exposure to the cold.
As for the choices, how each one pans out subtly changes the atmosphere between Crowe and the MC in a believable way, and allows for Crowe's personality to flow steadily between him being a 'sweet, low-key manipulator' and a 'hot-blooded fanatic'.
Overall, I feel that Crowe's character, specifically his personality and dialogue in general, are the best part of this game. In a way, it's hard to describe, but when compared to the more extreme yandere types I have seen in games, Crowe's oddly mature yet fun-loving personality is strangely appealing. So much so, that I quickly found myself forgetting that he's a yandere type--until the moments that he is alone or panicked where it briefly peeks out. On a side note, I don't know if you plan on adding 'intimate' scenes, but Crowe and the MC's chemistry is off the charts--so kudos on that as well.
The only thing I could perceive as 'needing work' is that Day 2 feels rushed compared to Day 1, but it's also where the demo ends, so for all I know, there could be more to that day.
Another thought that crossed my mind while playing was that Crowe was stated to be in his late twenties or early thirties, and yet he looks much younger than that. It doesn't really matter (because anime), but it caught me off guard for a second.
All in all, I came for the yandere romance and thrills, and am super excited to see the finished product now. Well done! ^_^
This game is amazingly well done. From art, to voice actors, to the smooth layout. It's a tiny bit too fast paced in terms of having the chance to "warm up" to the characters right after they come to life, but overall, I'm extremely excited to see what you have in store and I will happily wait longer for quality like this. Thank you for making such an awesome game!
This game is amazingly well done. From art, to voice actors, to the smooth layout. It's a tiny bit too fast paced in terms of having the chance to "warm up" to the characters right after they come to life, but overall, I'm extremely excited to see what you have in store and I will happily wait longer for quality like this. Thank you for making such an awesome game!
Absolutely! Regardless of no romance route, you should know that you did an amazing job with portraying their personalities! Channery was my second favorite, and while I only selected 'Safeword' to see the other endings after finishing them all, the twist at the end of Channery's route was delivered really well.
I can't wait for the next game! ^_^ <3
Hands down, Exit is my favorite. Honestly, it was all so good, it would be amazing if there was a sequel for this where the MC goes back for a 'tune-up'. I would totally dig seeing if and how a romance unfolds with these characters in the futuristic world they live in.
Amazing job!
By the way, the 'Safeword' feature was an interesting touch. Very clever!
Is there a certain format that you want the typo/grammar errors to be pinpointed?
Example:
Common Route>Pg.(?)>
Jaylene: "Are you sure this isn't a joke haha...?"
Xanthe goes up to me flashing her teeth.
Fix: Xanthe came up to me, flashing her teeth.
Pages are not numbered, so it's difficult for us to point out exactly where they'd be for you to fix in the program; so you don't have to go through bouts of text, I mean.
I have a ridiculous amount of free time if you want me to just fix it for you.
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