I'm really sorry, for some reason either it wasn't showing on tle language list or me being a blind bat.
Buuuuut now... I'll go and make some people play it %)
This is a very interesting beginning, would love to see where it goes. I have to agree with LightningMaestro, though, but not on "all options" - there are some conflict moments here and there.
I'm interested in this and will check it out after a few more updates, but there's something that confuses me.
It strongly feels like I'm reading a second or even third book in the series and that I'm supposed to know who are all the characters and their relationships with the world around them and with each other.
Otherwise, good luck with your work!