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I'm amazed that you call it "A" story lol. 

Joke's aside, might redo it

They are handtailored by a guy named Bobby, I'll tell him you stopped by. K. Bye. 

Well, no plans for anything. But sure, why not. 

Probably will when I have a little more content or when finished.

If I can do it, that is.

I'm sorry! 

I do like the fighting and might use it in another one. Thanks for letting me know 🙃

I worked on it yesterday. 

Thanks! 

The idea is to make them all. But separate.  Like a magazine, or episodes, not a movie. 

That you follow MC, in a world, and get glimpses into MC's life. 

Either way, that's what I'm about to try. 

Hey, thanks! 

Glad to get some feedback. 

True!

Thanks for clarifying. 👍

Fantastic! Been waiting for your answer. 

Thanks again 👍

Awesome, just what I was looking for. 

Thank you! ❤️

Fantastic comment. This is what keeps me going. I'm glad you enjoy it. 

Thanks! 

I hear you. 

Sadly, as of right now, the colored speech bubbles is to much of a hassle. 

I like the idea though. Might be able to implement something like that in the future. 

Fair point about the clothes 👍

Thanks. 

Meet Emma, a normal, naive 18 year old girl who tries  her best in life.

Alongside her friend Olivia, they explore and survive in a somewhat normal universe.

Traveling around til they eventually find their place in life and can root themselves.

A visual Novel with some choices for the player.

The game contains 5 menus, 884 images, and 23 screens.

Currently working an hour or two every day with the game.

I love to receive feedback and reply as fast as I can.

Hope you enjoy!

https://adventurestudio.itch.io/emma

Oh, alright! I'm on it. 

Once again, massive thanks ❤️

Uploading a new version as I'm writing this.

It should run smoother. I had to redo a lot of work, but it should run much better now.

Call it a minor optimazation.

If you would be kind enough to let me know if you experience any improvements, I'd be glad.

I'm sorry about that!

I am by no means a computer expert and right now I can't help you.

If more of you who download the game experience the same thing, I will be sure to look in to it.

And if someone has an idea about what it could be, reply to this.

Thanks!

Big thanks! Appreciate your time. 

I agree with you about 100%. 

More is less, most times, I feel. If it has a purpose, it is good. But I don't want it to complicated either. 

And if it seem to be a random act of weirdness - that should be clear to the viewer. 

Thanks! 

Hey, and thanks!

That's a fair point and I will absolutely take that in consideration. 

Since it is a prototype, I'm, more or less, throwing ideas out there. 

Absolutely love the critique. 

Keep it coming! 

Thanks buddy!

I really do appreciate it. It helps the story to grow and the characters, more alive.

And about animations. 

That's a good idea and I've started to incorporate them as an alternative to capturing a "mood" or "feeling" in a scene. 

So far Olivia have picked those clothes. So it wasn't Emma's choice. And she went with what her friend wanted, thinking it was cool and hot. Since she got attention from Robert at the beach. She liked it and wanted to relax her mind, to feel free. 

I think it's important to build up something, I guess that's why I keep all those images. Like life is a lot of "non-action". I know this isn't life, but there you have my thoughts. 

Thanks for the comment! 

Thanks for your comment!
The character models are losely based on "the incredibles-style."