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This is excellent. There are some minor problems with the text, but otherwise, great!

In the text, there are these text captions for character portraits like this one:

Briony. Daughter of merchants,

these should be like:

Briony - daughter of merchants,

There may be some more problems like this.

Nice game.

Wrong word used on page 22 of PDF:

"This character is an ancestor of your recently deceased hero and is burdened with the need to avenge you."

"ancestor" should be "descendant".

This is a wonderful and easy-to-use resource in PDF form. 100% 5 *****. Would buy again.

The oracle word at Hearts x Ace which is currently "Evovle" should be "Evolve". Why? Corrected spelling.

The oracle word at Spade x Jack which is currently "Defenses" would be better as "Defense". Why? Singular instead of plural.

Instead of "Bonuses" use "Boons". Like this:

• Rules are hyper-focused on the most monster-y parts of the PCs: their powers (Boons), their inhuman vulnerabilities and threats (Banes), and how they remain tied to the mundane, mortal world of humanity (Bonds).