Echoing what others have said about your strengths here: the descriptive content, the voice direction, the variety of dialog, the mechanic of keeping those dice forward and the style of your table results are all excellent. My only constructive feedback is that I think your intro paragraph could use some additional punctuation and potentially clause reorganization in order to give it a bit of a punchier cadence.
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