Cute! Also can't help but notice the characters look suspiciously familiar :p
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Seems like a nice start! But, I will have to reserve judgement for now since I have had expectations crushed on what seemed like would be good games.
Only issues I saw within prologue:
-A few grammar issues, but not bad enough that it is impossible to tell what is being said.
-Scenes where Noble character "walked" forward a few feet seemed kinda robotic as if she teleported rather than walk (a tip for future walking: switch which foot is in front when moving the character model forward (if you are able to), it will drastically reduce this issue!)
Again, seems like a very nice start! Just been disappointed a lot lately by NSFW games.
Cute ^-^ Quickly became one of my favorite exhibitionism focused games.
My only issue with it was not being able to ward Maria away from having sex during the beach bar events, and potentially warding her away from it could have shifted her yacht events to just being closeted lesbian.
And, in future updates, my only request would be to end up not requiring clothes or swimwear/towel in any class at all (exhibitionism already exposed to most of the students and teachers anyways, not like it would be a big surprise).
Possibly an issue to look into (it may have just been a one-off crash on my end that was annoyingly timed):
Game locked up when Poppy approached me after 3rd period class (was supposed to meet her in Orchard but had the beginning sequence for Queen of The Ring trigger, keeping Jess in the class). After approaching me outside the class and saying all she had to say, she walked to the left but maybe 2 squares before she reached the classroom directly to the left, the game locked up.
(I probably explained this poorly... my best guess what happened is that another "event" blocked her movement path and she doesn't have "Skip if Cannot Move" enabled (which may not even be a thing in VX Ace, I'm not sure since I'm used to MV) so the game locked up as she can't move nor can she skip movement and I can't move until her movement is over.)
Another small issue is the two bad girls in the park who want Vodka before school. I took their quest, looked around for Vodka for a few minutes, and decided to just give up and go to school - ended up being unable to because Missy said she wouldn't steal from them and to either complete the quest or give money back, but... when I tried to give the money back it would just play a scene asking if I had the Vodka yet rather than allowing me to give the money back. (Was it even saying money...? I can't remember, I don't think my money count increased after talking to them so I don't know) - Ended up just going to one of the fast travel signs and bypassing the "I'm not going to steal" thing.
Just some issues I found - Keep up the good work on the game :D
Warning... Wall of Text (guess it shows how much I like this game, though xD)
I've previously made a comment of suggestions and such, and after playing a bit more I've found/come up with a few more things (some of which may be planned for post-alpha):
-The option to climb over low walls/fences/objects.
-Changeable difficulty within apartment (Normal and Hard). Normal is the same as it is, Hard would increase NPC detection range, increase speed of confidence falling, and disable the detection circle. If wearing the Blindfold on Hard, sight is completely darkened so that only Rika can be seen on-screen (opposed to Rika and what I assume is 4 feet around her).
-Buyable clothing at a shop within the neighborhood (like maybe on the other side of the bridge), opposed to being unlocked by default. Starting out, only the Casual outfit and Towel would be available, and the rest are purchased, with Yen being earned as 5% of points earned when going Home (or 10% on Hard to reward the extra challenge).
-NPC Suspicion at close range. When in close proximity to an NPC, if Rika does not have Bra/Panties/Socks on but does have dress or shirt and skirt on, a detection circle pops up and fills very slowly, hinting at their suspicion. This can also apply when exposed and walking behind an NPC.
-NPC Hearing. Simply NPCs being able to hear if Rika is masturbating too fast (since fast masturbation would cause moaning and/or squishy noises), which will cause them to move toward the source. NPCs can hear twice as far away on Hard.
-Vibrators that can be equipped within the wardrobe. Will automatically fill up Rika's lust whether she is naked or not. If she reaches full Lust with the vibrator in, she will automatically kneel down to cum, preventing movement for a time while letting NPCs detect her regardless of current clothing. In Hard difficulty, the vibrator will fill Lust twice as fast. Using NPC Hearing as described above, they could hear it if in close proximity and get suspicious (also as described above).
-Toggleable difficulty modifier (separate from Normal/Hard) to make it so the less Covered Rika is, there's a higher chance per step she'll drop her apartment key (it will start glowing 10 seconds after being dropped). When wearing any amount of clothes that prevent detection circle (or suspicion as described above) she won't drop it, but if she's completely naked it would be a 20% chance to drop per step she takes (as an example). After being dropped and recovered once, it won't drop again for the rest of that session.
-More restricting items (similar to blindfold). One I thought of would be ankle cuffs that take the shoes slot, with them on, Rika cannot move faster than a walk. Another would be Handcuffs (only available when Naked and meant for the Key modifier above) that prevent Rika from climbing things (as described above), prevent her from crawling or covering, and make grabbing the Key slower.
-Walk button. Probably don't need explanation here. Just a button to walk on PC opposed to jogging. Using the modifier of dropping the Key as I described above, Walking could halve the chance of dropping the key.
-More Challenge Ideas:
--With a Vibrator equipped, never allow it to completely fill Lust
--Allow a Vibrator to completely fill Lust while completely naked
--Leave the apartment naked, buy clothes, and return
--Leave the apartment wearing only Handcuffs, streak 100m and return
--Leave the apartment wearing only Ankle Cuffs, streak 100m and return
You're welcome for pointing out some of the stuff :D
-In regards to the glitch I encountered with the prefects:
--I had only encountered prefects with a hall pass - none of their H Scene stuff. Three times to be exact - twice for normal bathroom, once for the messed up bra.
--I did not leave the classroom at second period (I tend to play classes out unless there's an event that requires me to go to the bathroom)
--I think what had happened, when they caught me, the script thought I was in third period, so they took me to third period (skipping lunch). I did ask for my clothes back after, and when I tried going to either the library or the lunch room after, both were blocked off.
-And a second glitch I encountered an hour or so after my previous post: When doing the quest to get the 70 Gold from Emily (for Abbie's lingerie), I went through the event with her up to when she said she'd give an extra hundred for sleeping with her. When I went upstairs and entered her bedroom, it triggered what I assume to be a future event with Tammy, despite there being no character models within the room other than Missy. After doing the "sleep with Emily" event - upon leaving the room, the event with Tammy triggered again. My best assumption is that the event trigger might have a missing conditional variable or switch (but then again, I'm not used to how VX Ace does things).
Anyways, keep up the good work! It's a very well made game from what I've seen so far!
I'd rate this at probably 7 out of 10. There's a lot of detail in the maps and scenes, characters actually move toward destinations, random generated school days, etc, which are well appreciated. But the following are why I don't say 10 out of 10:
-Always room for improvement! (so I will never say something is a perfect 10 out of 10 x.x)
Now actual issues and such...
-Window size is TINY and can't be maximized to fit the screen (at least, I wasn't able to)
-Events get very repetitive (I've done the quest to get the Friendship Ring like 7 times by this point, played Rugby Tag probably 12 times, etc) (Some more events/quests, and variations of existing events would be nice, like for example if there was a chance for the dilemma in Rugby tag were between Abbie and Jess instead of Abbie and Lola)
-It seems once the Bad Girls relationship thing is too low, its impossible to repair it. Possible I've just not found the event that repairs it yet.
-A glitch I encountered from the following sequence: Bra was awkward in first class and had to go to Bathroom to fix it (with Hall Pass) -> Back to class -> Break -> Group Study Room Class -> Tried going to lunch room at break -> Prefects appeared asking for Hall Pass (which they weren't supposed to do since it was the Lunch Break) -> No Hall Pass -> Led to Miss Paris in next class and missed anything I could have done during the Lunch Break
-Break quest to help the Bad Girls climb the fence appears to be broken (I help them, distract the prefects, and wait for them to come back but they don't, until I go through a map transition and back, after which they re-appear and don't talk to me. Maybe this is all by design, but it just seemed awkward to me)
-No Auto Dash like other RPG Maker games (this may just be because of VX Ace, but either way my finger started hurting from holding Shift)
-And just a personal problem I had: RPG Maker VX Ace is extremely awkward to me (I'm used to games made with MV)
Anyways, that's all I had to say! I look forward to seeing where the game goes from here :D
An interesting game, and probably the first I've played that includes Nudity, but not sex. I'd give it a 7/10, because it isn't perfect, but I'm sure that will change as more updates are released. Following that, some of the tings that bugged me:
-Lack of female NPCs (as if Rika is the only girl in the neighborhood...? Maybe female NPCs just didn't spawn during my time playing, though.)
-Can't but bra/panties on with Shirt/Skirt on (I first noticed this when playing the Get Dressed mode, where I found my skirt, then found my panties, and couldn't put them on because of the skirt. While it does make sense in some ways to block this function - it is actually entirely possible to take bra/panties on/off with a shirt and skirt on. This may also extend to socks/stockings being blocked with shoes (I haven't tested), but that makes sense to block.)
-Using xbox controller sticks when masturbating is slower than a snail stapled to a dead turtle... (Whereas using a mouse is like a rabbit on meth.)
-I'd like to use the Blindfold more, but the annoyance factor of it is too much. I like that it lessens player vision, but it would be nice to keep the detection circle thing. Rika knows when people are looking at her from behind her back, and having a blindfold on would heighten hearing a bit, so I don't see why the detection circle is removed. Maybe make it a toggle-able option in the settings to remove the circle for various circumstances? Detection Circle Normal On/Off, Detection Circle Blind On/Off.
Anyways, that's all I had to say! Keep up the good (*ahem* perverted) work! I look forward to seeing how this game grows.
Yay! More tormenting Mar- d*mmit!
Anyways:
-(Likely a Bug) I've noticed that the Rest Point in Pixie's Lair will trigger a masturbation scene when clicking the "Nevermind" Option. Strangely though, my character is female and it triggers a male masturbation scene.
-Speaking of Pixie, I'm completely incapable of figuring out how to trigger any event with her, though it's likely due to me completely restarting (not New Game+, a completely fresh save) and for all I know, her events may be activated after completing quests I haven't done on the new save
-Keep up the good work as always, with providing an amazing game for everyone during these trying times in the world! ^-^
Hooray! New update and a new character to tormen-... waitaminute... something's not right here...
(And regarding this) I don't know if something isn't working, or I'm just incapable of figuring it out, but after completing Marin's event, the Logbook has 2 tasks that say "Appease Marin". One is greyed out (complete), other White (to-do). But I'm incapable of figuring out if it's maybe a glitch/accident or if there's something hidden that I can't find.
Still absolutely loving this game :D - even if a lot of stuff confuses me on what I'm supposed to be doing.
You're welcome!
And it's just something kind of annoying I noticed. Didn't affect the overall game too much in my opinion.
I look forward to see how the game progresses as its one of the better 18+ VNs I've played.
Also I can completely understand the solo developer thing. I've been solo working on an RPG Maker project for over a year now but I have sooo many ideas that I'm barely passed the prologue bit :/
I downloaded this a few days ago, and I'd like to think it's a pretty good game.
Granted, I've only played the female side of things (for hopefully obvious reasons), so I don't know anything about the male side.
But with the female version of the story, I did notice something rather annoying...
If the female player character is lesbian... why does she enjoy straight porn (especially in VR where she would be viewing from the perspective of a male)...? Bit of an oversight, I'm guessing?
You're welcome ^-^ Your game has quite a special place in my heart as a genuinely fun game.
With "annoying Cassie" I can't seem to find any other thing to do so. I've talked to her a lot (clothed), talked to her a lot (naked), given her Devil's Milk, but can't seem to trigger anything. Other comments I read were saying to talk to Cassie about Alissa but the only "Talk" option I have is "Ask about being bought". Possible I'm just not annoying enough which is a surprise given how much I enjoy torturing her :/ I'll try annoying her a bit more though.
Still one of the top 3 best RPG Maker games ever (imo). Hmm. No. One of the top 10 games I've ever played. Lot of detail (despite the map simplicity), lot of customization, and a lot of fun to just sit down and play.
Been a while since I've played (more or less because I've been ignoring my computer). But! Thought I'd list issues and such I've had with the new update as I've done previously:
-Yay! More ways to torture Cassie (via Alissa scenes).
-Also fun torturing Alissa by asking her name over and over again. (Think I may be a bit of a sadistic psychopath from how much I enjoy torturing virtual characters :/)
-Would be kind of cool if it were possible to change Bell to the Cow Outfit from the Naughty Kitty shop (I think it's Naughty Kitty shop, anyways) (But maybe make it so the player must be carrying all of the appropriate pieces to the outfit).
-Would also be kind of cool to be able to get a Cat Collar for Cassie (Though maybe already planned for after player domme/dom is added?)
-Maybe make it so Alissa can be a companion after capturing? Similar to Rinny and she'd be able to help in the Abandoned Town or the Forest?
--As an add-on to the above, maybe while she's accompanying the player there are tougher encounters from her previous bandit-ing victims?
-(Potential Bug) Speaking of Alissa, with her addition I've noticed all Bandit Girls are furry. Haven't tested if it's because of the shrine because I rarely turn off Furry Shrines for very long.
-(Potential Bug or just not sure what to do) Logbook says to hang out with Cassie and Alissa but I can't figure out what it wants me to do. I did the Bed scene then the Bath scene and can't find anything else that may continue their quest. Searched the entire Abandoned Town and the Forest area but didn't find anything that may trigger a new scene.
-With the above thing, maybe a solution could be to add a map event for all of the quests that can give players a more direct hint in exchange for money? For example, Fawn's hint event could be placed near her Shrine (although her logbook hints are pretty easy to follow), Cassie/Don's hint event could be placed near the Don Hideout gate, etc.
This is easily one of the better RPG Maker games I've personally played. Granted, I've only played a handful of them. However, some suggestions I have (some of which may already be planned or implemented and I have no idea about):
--Some way to increase NPC Breast Size (like Cassie, while cute the tiny breasts are *extremely* tiny >.<), possibly via a Spell or a Pill? [[Side Note: "Torturing" Cassie with the first "Date" was way too funny]]
--Maybe move Cassie's appearance change Shrine thing to her safehouse? I forget where the thing is almost every time I want to change her between her forms
--More enemies that are variations of the current ones so people who have specific fetishes and such turned off have an alternative (like the Wildcats, it would be nice to have a female one show up, which maybe they do and I just never see them)
--Harem-like stuff for the Player? (Likely after the Player Domme/Dom stuff is added)
--Hints about how to start questlines? Like to start the Don/Cassie's quest, the hint would say to push the Slums Guard out of the way, which maybe it already does and I just never checked the logbook *before* starting quests
--A bit more of like a forum-type layout to the itch.io page (so there can be separate sub-pages for Questions, Suggestions, etc.) to make it easier to find what others may have suggested or asked
--Lastly, I encountered a bug: I have Male Partners turned off, and when I encountered then defeated a Wildcat in the Forest Park area, it caused one of the "Exception" crashes. Don't remember the exact one but if I had to guess, it popped up because it saw I had male partners turned off so it didn't know how to handle the Wildcat's defeat.
You're welcome! It's one of the better Ren'Py (or just visual novel in general) games I've played. Probably even in my top 5 favorites of any game types just because I enjoy Violet's part of the story. With only being beaten 100% by Skyrim and Fable 2. Other than those, this is better than most full AAA games just due to this not lying or scamming players. Instead just annoying players who aren't interested in certain aspects (Though that doesn't take away much from being an awesome game) x.x
An amazing game overall :D
However, as much as I'd like to give this game an infinite amount of praise, there are plenty of things that annoyed me, personally.
Mostly in the random events. Almost every single time I clicked "walk around" I either got the Produce Market thing (which everytime I actually went into it, it just led to 2 choices to lose $150 :/ ), the Karaoke Bar (which doesn't interest me personally), or I would get annoyingly provocative men trying to convince me to something I'd never do in real life much less in a game.
With all of these being random encounter based complaints - it would be nice if the player actually has some kind of control over the type that pop up. For example, after choosing "walk around", the player could then choose something like "club street" (for club-based encounters), "dark streets" (for prostitution-based encounters), or other similar things as these so the player isn't forced to deal with things they don't want to deal with in the first place.
Further, it would also be nice to have lesbian based encounters. It's extremely annoying to me that the only lesbian based things I've found were through Violet and Kate, but their content eventually runs out, with it being story based.
I also noticed something strange on a recent playthrough. I was doing Violet's Sub route and finished all of it, then started doing the Bakery's stuff (big mistake on my part as it just creeped me out more than anything), but when it got to the point of doing the plastic surgery, which I denied, apparently it switched to Violet Domme route, where she bursted into the Bakery being angry, and the next school day was even playing out with her expecting me to get her food and all. Don't know if this change was intentional (her anger flipping her from Sub to Domme) or just a bug with how the code works.
Overall, great game that is worthy of an infinite amount of support, but with a few annoyances.
My entire request is as follows (line-by-line in Notepad++):
quest024 = {
code = '024',
questreq = true,
shortdescription = "Test Title",
description = 'Test Description. ',
reqs = [['sex', 'eq', 'female'], ['obed', 'gte', 50], ['beauty', 'gte', 60], ['char', 'gte', 20]],
reqstemp = [],
time = round(rand_range (20,40)),
reward = round(rand_range (175, 225))*10,
location = ['any'],
difficulty = 'medium'
},
I've compared it a good 20+ times to other quests but can't figure out the problem.
Okay, so by following your guide I did manage to make a Custom Request that does appear in Slaver's Guilds, however, it does not show the requirements that I made, and if I try to turn it in using a servant that does fulfill the requirements, it simply does not allow me to. Would you know how to fix this? It's entirely possible I may have misspelled a requirement in the file and it made everything else break.
I'm going to start out by saying that this is easily one of my favorite text-based games ever. Also starting out by saying I have not checked if someone else suggested this. It could even already be a feature that I just can't figure out.
As the title suggests, this is a suggestion for homosexual pregnancies. While it may not be entirely realistic, the focus of magic in the game does open up a lot of possibilities.
So it would be nice to see that magic focus extended to allow for female/female pregnancy without the need of Futa or possible even male/male pregnancy for those who prefer it.