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Done✨✨ Looking forward to your future projects!

It was a bit unclear where we were supposed to include our IG handle and I ended up neglecting to do so before submitting ^^'

Maybe you can consider adding a field for it in future similar forms 

Those are the best kinds of reasons =))

I feel like your games do a great job at creating tridimensional characters, so I can't wait to get more drawn into the interactions with the LIs.

Good luck with the development!!

Looking forward to it 🖤

Did you consider including a no-romance-good-ending? I'm aware this might defeat the purpose of the game, and I'm sure the romance routes will be fantastic. However, since we're subverting tropes anyway, it could be interesting for our MC to expand her Mighty Social Circle of 3 with a few morally grey platonic relationships 

Hei there✨

Not sure this is the right kind of feedback, but here I go -

-Whose route would you choose first? And why?

None...I might be doing this genre of game wrong, but I just made the choices which felt most true to what I understood the MC as (by the way, I think she's such a fun character - which might have backfired, cause now I'm more invested in her personal arc than in the romance). 

That being said, I don't feel like the romance in this one is doing it for me, because there's such an imbalance of power. From what I could grasp, the only way to not be killed is either to gain favour with the LIs or to make a pretty unintuitive choice (one that, by all logical reasoning, would be an easily disprovable lie. I feel like our quick-on-her-feet, witty protag wouldn't tell an obviously bad lie). For me, enemies-to-lovers only works when each side has equal power, or there's the possibility of overcoming the power imbalance outside of the relationship (but this is most definitely a ✨very✨ personal preference that does not reflect badly on the game.)

-What's your favourite scene/event?

The brother-sister interactions and the protag weaselling her way into a discount.  Also, the delightfully corny "iridescent sexy eyes revealed" trope. 

-Are you interested in playing the full release? 

Yes. I really enjoyed your other games.

-Are the LIs villainous enough for you?

I feel like the MC should be allowed her fair share of villainy/cunning to balance things out. Then, you can make the LIs as villainous as a religious figure in a cape et spade novel ♠️

-Other comments are welcome!

All that being said, I find all characters quite intriguing. 

Keep up the good work 🖤

This was a fun....something

Somebody go give Mr Disembodied Conscience a hug. And a new job.

Wow...the art is mesmerising. I can't wait to play!

This looks beautiful! I can't wait to play! 

Putting that kind of power in the player's hands is what makes your game unique to other VNs. That's why I'm sure the finished product will be marvellous!

I can't wait to experience the full game! The art is lovely, and the animated prologue was gorgeous!  Besides, I really like the idea of giving the protagonist the power to shape the world of the game.