sorry, personally i think the plot has potential however i think it's a little predictable also just the chunk where they're dancing in the elevator is a bit unessicary and just more to skip though and i personally found it a little unbearable also not to shame the artists but you could improve by adding more expressions and more detailed backrounds
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