Is there a good end for Takeshi? I think I did well but the ending seemed very bittersweet ;_;
Sorry, didn't think of that. Just do what you feel is best. Ultimately its up to you. Just if you went to patreon that might affect things maybe.
I think it would be okay to do explicit scenes if you tweaked his face little. And definitely in the game make sure to establish he is 18. In game it sounds like he is a high schooler.
How old is he in the story?