I have never been so bored in my whole life. You can cut out 90% of what there is and not lose a thing from the story.... I've never been so bored. EVER
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I thought this was GREAT. You get a feeling that somethings off, but how it unfolds was a wonderful treat. The scariest things are those without a clear explanation. You get just enough the story is cohesive but not enough that you can just wrap it up at the end. It leaves you with things to think about. Especially the ladies last lines. Really Enjoyed. Only critique I wish it was a bit longer, not much just like 5 minutes more.