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Really great game, it just seems like this is an origin story. Not the real story, but, like, the prequel to the real story. What I'm saying is, it's good, but it felt like it ended right before it was going to get REALLY good! I got the servant ending my first time through, and I do like that ending the best, but the game ended before I could actually BE the servant! See what I'm saying? It's like it ended just as the good part was about to begin!

And I LOVED the Amazon, but I wasn't a big fan of the partner girl. I was hoping there would be an ending where I could lose the partner girl along the way, give up on adventuring, go back home with the Amazon and just be her housewife. That's the ending I was REALLY hoping for. But no such luck. Disappointing...

Anyway, good game overall, but I think "Slave U" is your real magnum opus. That game is absolutely incredible. One of the best I've ever played. Is that ever going to get finished?

Thank you.

Cool. Keep up the great work.

I finished the whole thing, all choices, all endings. (SPOILER ALERT.)

It's one of the best games I've ever played. Damn near perfect. I do think it would have been better if Stan had been a black guy, but I know that would have required a lot of changes to the whole second part of the story, seeing as how he works with skinhead bikers and all. But still, it seems like the perfect role for a black man, and the fact that he isn't seems like a wasted opportunity.

Other than that, I just wish that, on the Resistance route, there would have been an ending where Maya decides to Stay with Stan and/or Stan gets the upper hand and takes out Jennifer and John. Because I think Stan and Maya are a super-hot couple, much hotter than Stan and Jennifer, and I would have liked to see more possibilities where Stan and Maya end up together. The idea of Maya willfully betraying Jennifer for Stan in the end is super hot, but no such ending exists. Another wasted opportunity.

So, do you have a sequel in mind? If you choose not to execute Stan in the end on the Resistance route, that should come back to haunt the Turner family in the future, don't you think?

Anyway, thank you. Excellent job. And I look forward to more great things for you in the future! :)

Stan should have been a black guy.

Oh, geez. I'm sorry to hear that. I hope you can get that cleared up. It is a really good game. One of the best I've ever played. I've been playing it and haven't had any virus problems yet, so I'm sure it's fine. Thank you.

I clicked on "Single File Download" for Windows. It gave me the warning message...

I will throw caution to the wind and download from here anyway. What the fuck am I paying McAfee $150 a year for anyway? Wish me luck...

I just remembered. I downloaded it from F95zone because, when I clicked on the link to download it here, a warning message came up saying, "WARNING: This Page Has Been Quarantined. Our system has flagged this page for additional review due to potential suspicious behavior from the page owner." So I thought it best to steer clear of downloading it here. Downloading from F95 gave no such warning. And it says v1.0 there too, so it should be the same thing.

The last was "Enter the tournament" or "Refuse him." And the second to last was "Look for a trail to Maya at the club" or "Join Brock and Samantha."

And there's another dead end after getting the information about Maya and Autumn's whereabouts from Ralph after banging him. He calls the next morning, John teaches Jennifer how to shoot, she goes back to her hotel room and thinks, "(Even if the price I paid for that information was... high.)" Then fade to black, next screen, "Thanks for playing." Very awkward place to end.

I thought this was a complete game! John entered the tournament at the fight club, and then it just ended. I guess he lost the tournament? It would have been nice to actually see that happen. Not just "If he can win this, we might have a real chance at bringing Maya back..." and then just fade to black and "Thanks for playing!" What a let-down! And it was such an awesome storygame leading up to that...

Huh?

This is fantastic! I love this game! So great to see a new update!

...So, when are you going to finish FemDom City?

I think just restarting the computer fixed the problem, but I'm still wary...

Fantastic demo! I can hardly wait to see more chapters! Keep up the great work!

Happy to help!

This is super sexy. I'm enthusiastic to see more. I just hope that, in future updates, there are actual choices that lead to different paths and endings and not just one linear kinetic story. That would be disappointing.

I can't figure out how to get passed the red tentacles in the ice dungeon.

I see you've published a new game... But I liked this game! Are you ever going to finish it?

I saw this game on F95 and played it a few months ago. I liked it, but it was too short and too kinetic. More like a demo/preview of what could become a really great game rather than a game itself. Is there more content now, or is it the same as it was last November?

Thanks.

You've got a good concept here, I wouldn't be commenting if I didn't like it, but there's definitely room for improvement...

First of all, why the name "Dara?" The fact that it ends with an "a" makes it sound like a girl's name. I thought "Dara" would be a female before his character was introduced. Getting cucked by a guy with a girl's name... doesn't really work.

And Dara should be... oh, how should I put this... BLACK. Even as pathetic as the protagonist is, the idea of getting cucked by an upper-class teenage white boy is kind of laughable. Upper-class white guys are the kind of guys who GET cucked, not the kind of guys who CUCK. Just saying...

And a technical note, I don't know what program you used to create the game, but it's a poor substitute for Renpy. Not being able to save the game when I please or roll back or fast forward through text is quite frustrating.

Too little content as yet to judge, but it looks promising. I'm looking forward to future updates.

What the fuck are you talking about? What does that even mean? You're really bad at this, aren't you?

Then he should just stop trying to be a half-way crook and make it an incest game.  Sure, he'd lose a lot of views (like mine), but at least the people who do view it will be his target audience.

Fantastic!

Good prologue, but I hope the actual game has choices branching paths leading to multiple different endings and isn't just a kinetic novel. And I hope there's a path that leads to a relationship where the protagonist is totally dominated and physically abused by the stepsister. Do that, and I'll give this game a very high rating.

How can he masturbate when he's drunk? A man's dick doesn't work when he's drunk. That's why I quit drinking.

Fantastic game, keep up the great work.

PLEASE tell me there's a path where we get to marry either Beth or Claire!

Wow, you REALLY need to learn how to deliver a joke.

Do what again? What are you, some Internet tough guy? It sure is easy to be a six-foot-four powerlifter and streetfighting god from behind the confines of a keyboard, huh?

This is a great game! Please tell me it hasn't been abandoned.

Abandoned game?

Same thing I hate about all RPG Maker games -- too much walking around looking for shit, not enough actually doing shit!

Where is "The Queen's Throne?" I think I've looked everywhere, and I can't find it.

No, same problem. The window size is right now, and a screen comes up with two buttons saying "Start Game" and "Change Resolution." I clicked on both buttons over and over again, but nothing happened. Then I just started clicking around the screen randomly, and it looks like it started. There was Stacy again, with two buttons at the bottom, "Next" and "Back," and I click them both over and over again, but nothing happens. Nor when I click anywhere else.

Then, to add insult to injury, I reduce the window size in the browser, and when I maximize it again, it's back to being way too big.

No Futa or FemDom content? Then I'm not interested.

Thank you.

The first problem I had was that it was too big for my computer screen. I got that fixed (don't ask me how), but then the problem was, I couldn't advance the screen. There's "Stacy" saying something, so I click the button that says "Next," over and over again, but nothing happens. Must be a glitch of some sort.

Too vanilla.

I really liked this game! Fantastic! You should make more like it.